FAMILY. WRITING ACTIVITY
COMMUNICATION II
Dear students
Welcome to this learning blog
In this blog you are going to write a 5 sentence report about the questions on the board game.
EXAMPLE
1.My mother in law is the oldest person in my familt. She is 85 years old but she is very strong
2.In my family I look like my father. People say that we are very similar. My father is very hansome and nice
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By TATIANA OLMOS
1. I have two grandparents. My mother's mother and my father's father, because the others grandparents are dead.
ResponderEliminarMy grandmother is 73 years old, is happy and beautiful , she likes stay with her family, she always cooks for all and eats a lot of food. My grandfather is 92 years old, he is angry and lonely person. He prefers stay alone in his house.
2. Ricardo is my cousin, he is a funny person in my family, he is 30 years old but he is like a child, he plays, sings, does joke, he is mischievous and nice.
3. I want to get married in 20 years because first i want to study a lot, travel around the world and meet different cultures and people before to get married.
4. I think that i need to live alone for a long time without my parents or any other, because i want to learn how is live alone, with my responsibilities and have my own things.
5. On weekend evening my family stay at home and we watch a movie together, we cook popcorn , drink soda and eat different chips. We like spend our time in talk about the movie and share comment about it.
By MARIA ISABEL LAMBIS GUERRA
Hi Maria Isabel. Good job
EliminarYou gave enough details. Please check some gramamr errors. check the first paragraph. (he likes stay) he likes to stay
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grammar
Eliminar1. My restless niece Esther is the youngest in the family because she is only four years old.
ResponderEliminar2. Not having children is better, because life is too complicated to make it worse by carrying someone else.
3. My sister Maria is the funniest in the family, because her heavy jokes are the best. Everyone in the family laughed about her jokes.
4. Having a good relationship with family is important, but friends are more important because those relationships define our participation in society, while family reinforces principles.
5. My uncle's name is Esteban is a great man with short black hair, very friendly and cheerful. I don't know how old he is because we stopped counting his years after his 27th birthday, but I guess he's about 35 years old.
by Antonio De Jesús German Baptista.
Hi Antonio. Yo did a great work
Eliminaryiu stablish a clear focus
Use descriptive language
Provide relevant information
Communicate creative ideas
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1. The youngest person in my family is my sister Elena, she has 9 years old, she likes to sing, dance and draw.
ResponderEliminar2. I have four aunts their names are: Lenis, Maida, Ana and Maria Bernarda, and two uncles their names are: Carlos and Dario, they are only from my mom, from my dad I have two uncles their names are: Cesar and Luis Guillermo, and two more aunts their names are: Miriam and Raquel.
3. My mom says that I look like her brother Carlos, my uncle, she says that I look like him physically but mentally I look like my father.
4. The funniest person in my family is my aunt Lenis, she is always making jokes, and saying funny things.
5. Well I have a lot of cousins, in total, including me we are fourteen cousins, we always play together when we go to our grandma's house, she always yells us to make silent.
By Ubaldo Pérez Conde
Dear Ubaldo. Good job.
Eliminarcheck the first sentence. She has 9 years old or she is 9 years old?
You made use of diverse word choice, descriptive words
Sentence variety
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Oh I see the mistake teacher, she is 9 years old.
EliminarHi!
ResponderEliminar1. The funniest person in my family is my old brother, Gustavo. He's 23 but he is just like a 9 years old child, he is friendly and outgoing, is a Joker! He is very talk-active and we always laugh a lot when he shares jokes with us.
2. On the weekend, my family and I usually go to the park (First Avenue) with our dog, Doky, we spend time together, laughing, walking and also eating icecream.
Sometimes we go to the cinema to watch a movie, we eat popcorns and drink soda. Eating in the cinema is the best for me! because the popcorns are delicious.
We also go shopping, or maybe go outside to eat fast food, that´s very funny and relaxing for me.
3. It would be nice to have just one little brother , because when they are small they are very beautiful and cute, I'd definitely love that !
4. I have 4 aunts and 5 uncles, they are awesome. Sometimes they invite me to eat fast food, or eat some desserts, I love desserts but I love my aunts and uncles much more.
I know I can count on them.
5. The funniest family activity is playing board games.
We usually play board games like "Tío Rico" (Rich uncle) or "UNO" (ONE) etc, we laugh a lot. The funniest part of this activity is my little sister, she is very competitive and almost every time she loses the game, and obviously, my old brother bothers her, we just watch that funny scene.
By Valentina Padilla Altamiranda
Dear Valentina
EliminarGreat job.
you use effective language, high-level vocabulary, sentence variety.
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ResponderEliminar1. I have 18 cousins, some are tall and others short, with brown or white skin.
ResponderEliminar2. It's better to have a child, he or she will have more opportunities to get into a school and other benefits, and also avoid overpopulation
3. My cousin Emmanuel is 5 months old, has white skin, big eyes and lots of hair. Is very sweet.
4. For me, our friends and our parents, both are a source of happiness and in whom we often find support and advice.
5. A happy family is having confidence, support, expressing feelings, spending time together and also knowing how to forgive.
By Xiomara Marcela Bello Morales.
Dear Xiomara
EliminarGood job.
You supported your ideas but I think you should check centence 3 and check commas (, .) because in some sentences there are too many commas
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ResponderEliminar1. My grandmother is the oldest person in my family, she is 77 years old, her name is Julia and she lives with my aunt.
ResponderEliminar2. The funniest person in my family is my cousin, he's 23 years old, he is very tall, happy and he studies civil engineering, his name is Juan.
3. A fun family activity is Twister, in this play people have to put their hands and feets ina color (yellow, blue or green) and they will try not to fall.
4. The youngest person in my family is my nephew, his name is Daniel Elías, he's 4 months, he is very happy and smiling, also he likes play with water.
5. I have six aunts (two are my father's sister and four are my mother's sister) and i have six uncles ( they are my father's brothers).
BY: Daniela Paternina González
Dear Daniela
EliminarGood job.
you Ddevelop a focus, use some descriptive language
Detail support idea
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ResponderEliminar1. I don´t know who is the youngest person in my family but I guess it´s my nephew, he is a baby, he is 8 or 9 months old, he's cute and his smile even more.
ResponderEliminar2. I'll get married when love comes and I really feel it, but if I find love and feel like it's still too early, I won't.
3. my maternal grandmother is the oldest person in my family, she's 82 years old, her name is susan, but my whole family calls her "mom".
4.I look more like my father physically, we're the same in the face, anyone who's seen us can corroborate it
5. I do not know. I guess 1 or 2, because I don't want to have a lot of kids. maybe later I want to have more, or less that's more likely .
By Daniel M. Pérez Nieto
Dear Daniel
EliminarGood job.
Just check some coherence in sentence 3 and 5
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ResponderEliminar1-a funny person in my family is my dad. He is very charismatic, he is very popular in the neighborhood because he makes everyone laugh with his actions and his jokes.
ResponderEliminar2-my grandparents live with me. Their names are Julia and Julio, she is 58 years old,and he is 70 years old. They don't work,they like to walk every morning.
3-for me,the best age to get married is at 30 years old,because at this age probably anyone has a job and a stable life.
4-in my family are 6 people, my father's name is jaime,he is 39. My mother's name is marlenis, she is 38. My brother's name is Julio, he is 13. My grandmother's name is Julia,she is 58, my grandfather's name is Julio,he is 70. And me,Keila, I'm 17.
5-my favorite aunt is my father's young sister. Her name is Marla,she is a single mother,she has a 3 children,and I admire her because she is a working woman.
By: Keila Padrón
Dear Keila
EliminarThanks for your participation
Vocabulary selection is appropriate
Selection of grammar is quite proper. please check sentence # 3,
be careful with the use of capital letters at the beginning of each sentence.
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ResponderEliminar1_My grandmother is the oldest person in my family, she's 76 years old, her name is Gregoria, she's very talkative and funny.
ResponderEliminar2_I'd like to get married at 27 years old, for me is the best age because firstly I want to keep growing as a person and as a woman full of values and knowledge. Personal development will allow me to learn about myself and what I want from life. At 27 years old I guess I'll feel ready for share my life with somebody.
3_A couple will be happy when they learn about respect, trust and freedom, the secret formula about a happy marriage doesn't exist but they have to be ready for share everything with the partner. They must work as a team on the relationship, the communication and honesty are vital.
4_The youngest person in my family is my cousin called Israel, he's 4 years old, he's smart and adorable.
5_My favorite uncle is Rolando, he's the best uncle ever! He's also my friend and guide, he helped me a lot with his advices about life and economy that he gave me when I was a child. I'm so lucky to have an exciting, happy, and fun uncle and ... I know that I'm his fav niece!
By: Cristina Hoyos Altamiranda
Dear Cristina
EliminarGood job
Selection of grammar is very proper. Juste check sentence 3
Vocabulary writing is precise
Writing is untidy but easily readable
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ResponderEliminar1. My father is the oldest person un my family. He is 63 years old, and he is a very hardworking person who still has a job.
ResponderEliminar2. I'd like to date with someone and see what happen next. At 30 years old will be a good idea to start thinking in married with someone.
3. The youngest person in my family is nephew, his name is Samuel, and he was born last year. He is very small and always want to cry when he is hungry.
4. A funny person in my family, i think would be me. I always try to be funny saying different jokes even un bad moments to feel much better and they too.
5. I would like to have children. I don't know how many but will be great if i have the oportunity to raise a child and take care of them.
By: José Daniel Gélvez
Dear José
EliminarGood job.
Writing is untidy but easily readable
Vocabulary writing is precise
Selection of grammar is proper. Just check sentence # 4
Check the use of commas
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1. How many people are in your family?
ResponderEliminarThere are 6 people in my family, I have two sisters, a brother, my mother and my stepfather, but now I live with my mother and my little sister, because my other siblings live and study in Medellín, and my stepfather works as a military man in Barrancabermeja. My mom is a businesswoman and a housewife at the same time. and my little sister is a student in the school, but she hasn't been to school for 4 days because of the "coronavisrus"
2. talk about a favorite aunt or uncle?
my favorite aunt is my mom's sister, she is very cute, she is intelligent, I even go to her work. she works as a businesswoman
3. talk about your grandparents.
I have two grandmothers and one grandfather, my mother's mother lives in Medellin, she is pregnant and very beautiful, she is 72 years old, my father's mother lives in monteria, she is 65 years old, my father's father lives in monteria together with my grandmother, they are 40 years married
4. When do you want to get married
why?
I want to get married when I will have a job and I will earn a lot of money, because to be independent I will need to earn money.
5. Being married or single: which is better?
Being married is better, because I think that being single is not good, and boring, also I want to have a family and later I want to have children, and to achieve that I must be married and not single.
by, Edwin carrascal cuello
Dear Edwin
EliminarGood job
Vocabulary writing is quite precise
You didn´t have to write the questions. please follow the instructions.
Selection of grammar is proper
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1- The oldest person in my family is my grandfather. He is 92 years old, his name is Teofilo Negrete, He lives in a farm with my uncles.
ResponderEliminar2- I think that is better one child because I can take care about him and be focused in his development, while, if I have five children I’ll be crazy in few years.
3- I have 10 uncles. I have 4 aunts and 6 uncles.
4- My cousin Jorge Paez is the youngest person in my family. He is 9 years old, he has dark skin, brown hair, he is short and he likes play baseball, he love this game.
5- Family is very important because they are always there when we need them and they have been present in our lives.
By: Alvaro Javier Negrete Paez.
Dear Alvaro
EliminarSelection of grammar is proper
Vocabulary writing is quite precise
Harmony of text is quite precise
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1. The oldest person in my family is my paternal grandmother, she is 77 years old, she has short hair full of gray hair.
ResponderEliminar2. The youngest person in my family is my cousin Gabriel, he is 3 years old, he is very restless and i love him so much.
3. I look most like my mom, she's short, she has curly black hair and she is very smart.
4. My dad is a funny person, he is always telling jokes and he makes us all laugh.
5. My favorite aunt is Amanda, she is my mom's sister, she is short, she has big brown eyes and she is kind.
By: Edriam Díaz Burgos.
Dear Edriam
EliminarGood job
Writing is untidy but easily readable
Vocabulary writing is quite precise
Selection of grammar is proper
Vocabulary selection is appropriate
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Hi,
ResponderEliminar1. The oldest person in my family is my grandmother, she is 100 years old, she is a lovely person, honest, tender and any times she is angry becausse she said that she is hurt all body, but the mayority time she is fine.
2. I don't know how many are cousin I have, I think that in generally are aproximity 56 and there are many them that I dont know. Only I know are 10 cousins.
3. I wont always live with my parents because I am a person that I like to have privacity and I belive that is better have many distance for that relations are nice.
4. For me the most important is the family because they're ready to help us before any problem and always friends are second opcion even if they are veri important in my life.
5. My family didn't anything in particular on weekend, we do differents activities for example: we go to cinema, we go to the park and we played soccer or basketball, sometimes we swim in the pool and we always cook together in the afternoon.
By Ana Paola Ramos Conde.
Dear Ana
EliminarWriting is neat but not easily readable.
Vocabulary writing is quite precise
Selection of grammar is quite proper. Please check the coherence and gramar errors in some sentences.
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ResponderEliminar1. The oldest person in my family is my grandmother Acasia, she is 75 years old and she is my father's mother. Even though she is very old she is still a strong and fun woman, who loves her children and grandchildren.
ResponderEliminar2. One of the funniest people in my family is my aunt Ana Claudia, she is always in a good mood and tells very good jokes and stories. I love her because when I am sad she brightens my day with her occurrences.
3. At weekends evenings me and my family usually go out to eat fast food at our favorite restaurant and have a good time laughing and eating.
4. I have around 25 cousins, my family is very big! But not with all I have a good relationship because they live far away.
5. A very fun activity that my family does is that every year we take a trip to the beach, it is a lot of fun and we have a great time, because we eat a lot of food, play games and take lots of photos.
By: Samia Buelvas Gonzalez.
Dear Samia
EliminarGreat job
Writing is neat and easily readable
Vocabulary writing is very precise
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ResponderEliminar1.the oldest person in my family is my grandmother, she is 95 years old. she has white hair and many wrinkles but she is very affectionate.
ResponderEliminar2.I want to have four children because I really like children and I feel that they would make me very happy.
3.I have an aunt who is very funny, she lives in Cartagena and when she comes to visit she tells us jokes that make us laugh until we run out of air, we also play and watch comedy movies
4.I would like to have a brother and two sisters because I would like to be able to do things as a family and thus enjoy with them. also to have someone to talk to and tell the things that happen to me
5.Both family and friends are important because both contribute important things to our lives, on the one hand the family is unconditional and on the other the friends are always there to help us when we need them, and we also have fun with them.
CARLOS CAMARGO PITALUA
Hi Carlos. You did a great job
EliminarHarmony of text is very precise
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ResponderEliminara fun person in my family is my younger brother, he is seventeen years old and he is a very smiling fun charismatic person, he always makes jokes and makes us laugh a lot
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I like to go to weddings because it is a fantastic moment, there are many flowers, many people with beautiful and elegant clothes, I like to see the bride when she enters with her white dress and her bouquet of roses, it is an incredible moment
3
My grandparents are wonderful people, I have my four grandparents alive and they are a combination of love, laughter and rage, but in general they are excellent people, I love them all, I love my maternal grandmother and my paternal grandmother, sometimes I think that It is very annoying, but I do not pay attention to that, and my two grandparents are incredible, I also love them very much, they are serious and loving
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A very fun family activity in my family is to watch comedy and humor movies since we spend special moments laughing and sharing together. We make popcorn and buy soda, for me it is the happiest time I can have.
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In my family, the one who most resembles me is my father, we have many similar characteristics. In the shape of the face and the texture, we are very similar, also in the personality we are charismatic and very funny extroverts, and we agree on most tastes and preferences, that's why perhaps most people say that we look alike
By:Jorge Nicolas Noriega Osorio
Dear Jorge
EliminarGreat job
Content is very in accordance with the topic
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1. I think family is most important, because mu family will support me even if I'm in my darkest time.
ResponderEliminar2. No, because for me it's enough with my only brother, he bothers me everytime so that's enough for me
3. A fun family activity is when we are watching movies on tv. Because we love romantic, comedy, horror, thriller and suspense movies.
4. I'd like to have four children (two and two girls). Because, want to adopt them.
5. I don't want to get married, because marriage implies a lot of responsabilities.
CAMILA MÉNDEZ ALZATE.
Dear Camila
EliminarGoo job
Vocabulary selection is appropriate
check some grammar erros in sentence 2
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ResponderEliminar1. I've 5 aunts on part of mom and 3 aunts on part of dad and also have 3 uncles on part of mom
2. My grandparents are very special for me two of them are in my heart and in heaven
I've the best memories of them from when I was child
They're live mother's dad. She is very sweet and nice with me, now she is living in Barranquilla and I miss her
I heardly see father's mom and rarely come near me
3. on weekends, my family and I going to eat to restaurants or sometimes watching movies on TV . We're very different but have tastes similar
4. Well, I've 4 sisters and 1 brother and I wouldn't like have more siblings then I have less inheritance for me jajaja
5. The best age to get married is around 27 or 35 years old For me
By: YINA PATRICIA LOPEZ GUZMAN. ;3
Dear Yina
EliminarSelection of grammar is quite proper
Vocabulary writing is quite precise
please check some errors
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1. The oldest person in my family is my great-grandfather who is 75 years old, he is tall, thin and has brown skin, if his hair is smooth and brown although he is not seen much for his gray hair
ResponderEliminar2. I have four uncles and three aunts, most of them are fat and short, their hair is straight and they have brown skin.
3. If I really enjoy weddings because quite a few well-known people meet and I can interact with many of them, but what I like the most is that there is plenty of food
4. My mom is one of the funniest people in the family because in each family gathering she is the one who brings joy to the environment and most of the time she is in good spirits, she is thin, she has long, straight hair and she is brown. and her skin color is white
5. Families are important because the family is the fundamental nucleus of society, and as such the entity that will contribute to the integral development of the person. The family is the fundamental component of any society, where each individual, united by blood ties or affinities, manages to project and develop
By DANIEL DE AVILA
Dear Daniel
EliminarGood job
Vocabulary writing is precise
Selection of grammar is proper
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ResponderEliminar1. My future plans don’t include the possibility of having children. But in case I change my mind, I would like to have two.
ResponderEliminar2. I don’t like the idea of always living with my parents. I’ve always liked independence, and I’ve always dreamed of having my own home, my own family, my own things, my own everything.
3. Yeah, I like going to weddings because I like fun, eating and drinking, and more than that, celebrating someone else’s happiness.
4. my favorite aunt: she is very kind, noble and has a big heart. she lives next to my house, always listens to me and helps me with my problems. She’s like my other mom. I love her so much.
5. It depends, because I’d like to be married to someone who I know is going to make me happy, with whom I know we are going to grow up together, who’s going to love me, and respect me forever. But if I don’t find someone to do it with, I’d rather be single.
By Yuliana López.
Dear Yuliana
EliminarGood job
Selection of grammar is proper
Content is in accordance with the topic
please check some capital letters
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ResponderEliminar1- I have forty-nine cousins, there are tall and short ones, we all only meet on special dates such as: Mother's Day at Grandma's house.
ResponderEliminar2- I look a lot like my dad Enrique because he has big eyes, thick eyebrows and a long nose and he is tall.
3- I would like to have a little brother, because I don't have a brother and it would be a lot of fun to play and play pranks on him.
4- I have 8 uncles and 11 aunts, it is very nice to have many uncles and aunts, because they take care of me, they correct me, they make me laugh a lot with their jokes and they give me a lot of advice.
5- we are 5 people, my father Enrique, my mother berlides, my older sister Sindy, Tatiana and me and I love you with all the strength of my soul.
By Angie Sánchez cantero
Dear Angie
EliminarHarmony of text is quite precise
Vocabulary selection is appropriate
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1) In my family there are five people: My mother Claudia, my grandmother Rosa, my brother Carlos, my twin brother David and me Jhon.
ResponderEliminar2) Twin is like a brother similar with your appearance, my brother David is my twin brother although we are not very similar now.
3) The youngest person in my family is my cousin Isaac, he was born in 2014, and currently he is six years old.
4) The oldest person in my family is my grandmother Rosa, she was born in 1950, and currently she is seventy years old now.
5) I have three cousins: Isaac, he is five years old, he is so kind, Melisa, he is sixteen year old, she is so funny and Daniela, she is twenty two years old, she is a great peron.
By Jhon Mario Lara Calao
Dear Jhon
EliminarVocabulary selection is appropriate
Selection of grammar is proper
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ResponderEliminar1.Grandparents are fundamental pillars in the family because there is not like them their experience and the value of their experiences, the values of the family the affection and affection that provides each grandson is unique.2.The best age is from twenty three to twenty eight because if you know the person you want to accompany you for the rest of your days and have the opportunity to talk know him and then decide if he is the right person to be by your side
Eliminar3.A twin is a person with similar appearance to the other person, their physical features are the same, it can be said that from the mother's womb, they are generated in a single bag also take the same feed, if I know the twins because in my house lives a neighbor whose children are identical and equal.
4I want to get married when I already have a career and I can use myself to achieve my goals or purposes and then organize myself to have the possibility of getting married, because it is not easy to say that you are going to get married but what is going to sustain the person has to keep in mind to make that happened to be a good situation is to say that I achieved their dreams.
5.The youngest person of the family is my cousin that is five years old is a very smart friendly and loving child likes to play football in their Free time.
By karenselena toro
Good job Karen
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1° Talk about the oldest person in your family.
ResponderEliminarR// My grandfather is the oldest person in my family, He is Seventy-three years old, Her name is Alfredo.
2° How many cousins do you have?
R// I have fifteen, and we have a lot of fun when we are together.
3° How many aunts and uncles do you have?
R// I have four aunts and six uncles, they are very funny.
4° Talk about a funny person in your family?
R// The funniest person in my family is my aunt Naibeth, She does very funny things.
5° Why are families important?
R// Because they are the engine to get ahead.
By: Elian Navarro Curiel.
Dear Elian
EliminarGood job but the idea was to support your reasons
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Questions.
ResponderEliminar1) How many aunts and uncles do you have?
I have 4 uncles and 6 aunts.
2) How many cousins do you have?
I have 12 cousins.
3) Talk about your grandparents.
My grandparents are wonderful, kind people, they care about the well-being of their sons, they are always in the right and the bad with the family.
4) Talk about a funny person in your family.
The funniest person is my aunt her name is Julia, she makes her laugh at all times, she always cheerful, she tells many jokes and makes us laugh a lot.
5) Talk about a favorite aunt or uncle.
My favorite aunt is Margarita, she's with me in the good and in the bad, she gives me a lot of advice and she's always there when I need her. She's like my second mother.
Andrea Sierra Cogollo.
Dear Andrea
EliminarGood job
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•I enjoy going to weddings because it seems to me very fun, nice and romantic, also, you can dance, eat, drink and share and interact with other people.
ResponderEliminar•I would like to have brthers or sister, I don't have brothers and sometimes I have been much missing to have brothers, sometimes you feel the need to have brothers, especially when you are a child and don't have who to play at home.
•I think that the best age to get married it is thirty years old, since at this age is already more responsible and focused and you can have an economic stability, you have already enjoyed our youth in many aspects and is prepared for life as a couple.
•My favorite aunt is Ángela, she is lovely, kind, respectful, solidary, she has a big heart, she is very beautiful and she is 29 years old.
•Fabiana is the youngest person in my family, she is my cousin, she is a beautiful little girl, she is one years old.
By Yovhaana Doria
Dear Yovhaana
EliminarGood job
Selection of grammar is proper
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1 My mom is a twin with my aunt, they are 44 years old, they like to drink coffee at all times or whenever they can meet.
ResponderEliminar2 Ely is my cousin, she is very friendly and is the funniest person in the family, she is 17 years old, has a younger brother than her, he is 7 years old, he is a very naughty and playful boy.
3 For now I am a very young person to have children, first I want to focus on my studies, after that in the not too distant future I would consider having 1 or 2 children.
4 I really like going to weddings, I really enjoy that, because they are very happy parties where they give a lot of food, I dance, I watch two people uniting their lives forever and I have a great time.
5 I think that there is no age to get married, because the best thing would be to finish your studies, be a professional, have a stable life and when and when you think it convenient to get married, do it.
By Irina Palomino
Dear Irina
EliminarGood job
Harmony of text is precise
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ResponderEliminar1. I have many cousins, because I have many uncles, I do not know the exact number, my maternal grandparents have 8 children and my paternal grandparents have many more that I do not know, each of my aunts and uncles have, on average, 2 children. but I have 2 cousins that I love very much because I grew up with them
ResponderEliminar2. My favorite aunt's name is Sandra, she is a kind person and I lived with her for a long time, she loves me as her own daughter.
3. I do not want to have children, they are not in my future plans, I want to do many things, like traveling and having children would be a little complicated
4. My family gathers at my grandmother's house on weekends, we will agree to make food and enjoy with them
5. In my family one of my cousins is very funny, he is always playing tricks on us, running around and saying funny things
By: Yennifer Hoyos
Great job Yennifer
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1. The oldest person in my family is my Grandfather. He is almost 80 but he still working, so i can say he is very healthy.
ResponderEliminar2. I think family member are important because is the only people that you can count on, and they are where you come from and they can represent you perfectly
3.No, i would not like another sibling, one sister is enough.
4. I think been married is better. Have company is good for mental health but you have to be sure about it. If that person is the indicated.
5. I did not meet my grandpaterns on father side, but they must have been good people
in the end mom called me as my grandmother. On the other hand i have my grandfather on mother side he is a good man, he made my mom what she is, at last but not least had one of the most important person in my life my grandmother, she is not with me anymore but i think she still carry me. One of the most impressive think about her was that she without know reading or writing, she had the enough knowleadge to made you a great person
Dear Nikolas
EliminarHarmony of text is quite precise
Vocabulary selection is quite appropriate
Please check some erros
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1. The youngest person in my family is my sister. She is 12 years old, she is samall and cute.
ResponderEliminar2. About my grandparents, they are 66 years old and they are lovely.
3. I have 3 aunts and 4 uncles, my aunts are beautifull and small and my uncles are very funny.
4. The funny person in my family is Armando, he is my uncle. All The time he is telling funny jokes.
5. My fovorite uncle is Armando becuase he is very funny and crazy too
Yimi Andrés Negrete Burgos.
Dear Yimi
EliminarPlease check some spelling errors
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1° Talk about the oldest person in your family.
ResponderEliminarR// My grandmother is the oldest person in my family, She is eighteen-two years old, Her name is Roquelina.
2° How many cousins do you have?
R// I have eight , and we have a lot of fun when we are together because we are very funny.
3° How many aunts and uncles do you have?
R// I have five aunts and eight uncles, they are very cool with me I love my aunt because she give things and their are very funny she like do things.
4° Talk about a funny person in your family?
R// The funniest person in my family is me because i am very relax and I do things Funny and my family say that I am very crazy xd.
5° Why are families important?
R// Because they are the engine to get ahead.
Luis Miguel moreno
Dear Luis
EliminarGood job but the idea was to support your answers and write more details.
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1. The youngest person un my family is my brother Cristian, he's 14 years, he likes to swimming , Sing, dance, and play guitar.
ResponderEliminar2. The funniest person in my family is my sister Andrea she is always making jokes and makes us laugh with the things she says.
3. The family is very important because they always there for US , a mother will always love her child no matter what happens and the brothers no matters the fights they Will almays be brother.
4. A very fun family activity in my family is to play parchis it's a lot of fun and we always have a good time when we play.
5. My favorite aunt is my mother's sister. Her name is Dany, she is a strong women because she had cáncer and she almays had a positive attitude towards the situation.
MARIA CAMILA OCHOA PALOMINO
Eliminar1. The youngest person un my family is my brother Cristian, he's 14 years, he likes to swimming , Sing, dance, and play guitar.
ResponderEliminar2. The funniest person in my family is my sister Andrea she is always making jokes and makes us laugh with the things she says.
3. The family is very important because they always there for US , a mother will always love her child no matter what happens and the brothers no matters the fights they Will almays be brother.
4. A very fun family activity in my family is to play parchis it's a lot of fun and we always have a good time when we play.
5. My favorite aunt is my mother's sister. Her name is Dany, she is a strong women because she had cáncer and she almays had a positive attitude towards the situation.
Name: María Camila Ochoa Palomino
Dear María Camila
EliminarVocabulary selection is appropriate
Please check some spelling mistakes
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ResponderEliminar1- The youngest in my family is my little cousin, her name is Elisabeth, she is one year old.
2- I have 4 aunts and 6 uncles on my mother's side And on Dad's side I have 7 aunts and 3 uncles. and in total I have 11 aunts and 10 uncles.
3- If i have children, I would have two, because it is easier for my economic stability unlike having 3 or more.
4- My favorite aunt is Yarlidis, she is my mom's sister. She is very sweet and frienly.
5- The best age to get married is at 30, because I think that at that age there is economic stability and maturity as a person.
By- Karen Babilonia
Dear Karen
EliminarGood job
Vocabulary writing is precise
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1. The youngest persona in my family is my nephew, he's 2 years old, he's a little boy, and very painful, he likes play with his toys.
ResponderEliminar2. I have 10 uncles and 7 aunts, yes, my family it's so big, but they live far from me, so I don't talk very much with them.
3. The families are important for meny reason, the most important it's his support for all of us becouse sometime someone need's help from the family, so we give help to him and that it.
4. I don't like have another sister or brother un my family becouse i have three sister and one brother, so I have many of them.
5. My family makes me angry sometimes becouse they forgett pay the Internet, that's makes me angry!
By Andrés Ordosgoitia.
Dear Andrés
EliminarYou gave appropriate information but please there are many spelling mistakes.Check them
3,5
1) I think between being single or married it depents, if you are in a good relationship, why be single? Everything is based on knowing how to choose.
ResponderEliminar2) in fact I just have a only grandparent, is my mother's father, his name is sigilfredo, because my others grandparents are dead.
3) I have 6 cousins, the older's name is Juan Guillermo, next is Nicole, follow is Juliana, Santiago, Alejandro and the youngest is Marisabel.
4) my family is very big so I'll only mention the members who live with me.
First is my momma, her name is Casifet she married with my step-father the last year. My little sister is indira she's 14 years old and my grandfather sigilfredo.
5) a twin is two people born in the same birth, is a brother physically equal to you. Unfortunately I haven't met any.
By: Iscel Villegas.
Dear Iscel
EliminarVocabulary writing is precise but check some grammar erros and I can see too many commas in the texts.
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1. The oldest person in my family is my mom, she is 59 years old, she works at RECORD and she is a wonderful person although she is from Santander ahahahha, she likes to pass time with her grandchildren.
ResponderEliminar2. I have 7 aunst and 6 uncle between my two families.
3. In my opinion family is more important because they are the people that help you to know the world and raised you also you can change your friends but you never can change your family they are only ones.
4. My family on weekend evenings normally stay at home and we watch TV, also some weekends we go out to see our other family.
5. A married couple can be happy if the understand that have a relationship is not all about that because you already had a life and you still have a life apart from the relationship.
By: Elias Tovar.
Communication 6 a.m.
Dear Elías
EliminarGood job
Good vocabulary use but check some erros
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1. I have 1 grandfather. My mother's father, because the other grandparents are desde,
ResponderEliminarMy grandfather is 70 year old, he is happy and friendly, he likes yo stay with his family, he likes yo travel yo he because he always cooks with me, we make fotos for everyone yo he satisfied, My grandmother on the part of My father , nevera net ver, she was 92 years old, according to My father, she was on angry and strict person she prefers yo he alone ay Home.
2. the funniest perdón un My family is my family is my older cousin, Oscar, he is 34 year old but he is like a 17year old teonager, he is friendly, funny, he loved yo travel a Lot araund the world and he always brings me something of a memoryhe talla a Lot and we always laugh a Lot when he shures jokes with ya, and when we go out for a wall ir is the Main un everything.
3 . I want yo hey married 30 traes because first , i want yo study haré, then build a house for My mother, traje My tomé ando travel the world, leer different cultures and people
4 . I hace 2 aunts and 2 uncles , they are amazing , sometimes they invite me to travel , i love going out for a wall with My aunts and buying many things , i love making stuffed arepa and eating with them and with My uncles, i always count for every thing they are by My side.
5 . The funiest family Activity is playing board games, usually we play board games like "bingo" "cards " etc.., we laugh a Lot then funniest parte is when You lose , because You hace drink a Big glass of water and whoever doesn't drink it, loses and hice me a Lot of laughter, because My das always, wins , Aldo when we go for a wall yo te farm se like yo play baseball , i like ir, because there is a too mucho space to run.
Dear Ana
EliminarPlease check I could not easily read your work. there are many erros.
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1. On Saturdays, my family and I usually visit my grandmother. except when there are celebrations and on Sundays, we always watch movies in the evening
ResponderEliminar2. my favorite aunt is my dad's sister because since I was born she always played with me
3. the youngest person in my family is my mother, she is 36 years old and she is very pretty, she looks like me
4. the oldest person in my family is my grandmother, she is 57 years old. I love her
5. I have two aunts who are my mother's sister and one who is my father's sister.
by: khiara ubarnes
Dear Khiara
EliminarVocabulary selection is appropriate
Vocabulary writing is precise
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1. I don't want to have children, because I don't want get married,I want to live alone.
ResponderEliminar2. The youngest person in my family is my cousin Jesus, he is ten years old, he is short and robust, he is very funny and smart.
3. My grandparents are very good people, my grandmother is tall and robust, she has black and gray hair and she is very friendly. My grandfather is tall and thin, he had black and gray hair and is very funny, I love them.
4. I would not like to get married, but if I do it, I think that the best age to do it would be at 30 because at this age I would be independent and have a good economic stability.
5. My favorite aunt is Diana, she is mi mom's sister, she is short, she has long black hair and she is very funny and smart.
By:Mary Mogrovejo
Dear Mary
EliminarGood job
Vocabulary selection is very appropriate
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1.The funny person in my family is my brother Andres, he is 28 years old and when he is at home we all laugh and enjoy time together. He usually always exaggerates things and that's what makes him fun.
ResponderEliminar2.The youngest person in my family is my nephew Enrique he is 2 years old, he is very cute and curious. He is the first and only son of my older sister. Enrique is very hyperactive and he likes to play and run everywhere.
3. In my family what we usually do on weekends is visit my older sister and we also play board games and watch movies.
4. I have four uncles and five aunts, they are brothers of my father and i also have two aunts and uncles, brothers of my mother.
5. The family is very important because they offer us protection, support, affection, they teach us values and manners. It is very important to always get along and be in harmony with all the members of the family, so that there is a good family atmosphere respecting each other.
By Aura Monterroza Medina
1.The funny person in my family is my brother Andres, he is 28 years old and when he is at home we all laugh and enjoy time together. He usually always exaggerates things and that's what makes him fun.
ResponderEliminar2.The youngest person in my family is my nephew Enrique he is 2 years old, he is very cute and curious. He is the first and only son of my older sister. Enrique is very hyperactive and he likes to play and run everywhere.
3. In my family what we usually do on weekends is visit my older sister and we also play board games and watch movies.
4. I have four uncles and five aunts, they are brothers of my father and i also have two aunts and uncles, brothers of my mother.
5. The family is very important because they offer us protection, support, affection, they teach us values and manners. It is very important to always get along and be in harmony with all the members of the family, so that there is a good family atmosphere respecting each other.
By Aura Monterroza Medina
Dear Aura
EliminarGreat job
very original
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1. The oldest person in my family is My Grandmother, she's 90 years old and it's love, it's a blessing of heaven it yet with us.
ResponderEliminar2. I don't want to have more children I have one who is getting crazy and I don't want more.
3. The youngest person in my family is my son, he is two years old and he likes to sing and count the numbers from one to ten.
4. The funniest person in my family is my dad, he talks a lot and tells us a lot about his antics from when he was young.
5. If I will always live with my parents, I have been with them for 20 years and I cannot imagine my life and my future separated from them who are the most important people in my life.
By: Dayana Montiel Payares
1. Families are important because they are in bad and good times, because they never leave you and because they are the only ones who really care about you.
ResponderEliminar2. family and friends are important to me, if the friends are true and sincere, each one has a special place in one's life.
3. The youngest person in my family is a baby. She is 11 months old. This month she is one year old. She is very happy and we are happy for everyone. She is my niece and her name is Luciana.
4. my grandparents are special people for my life, I love them, my grandfather is called mario, he is 65 years old, he is loving, happy and hard working, my grandmother is called Zenith, she is 60 years old, she is charismatic and he cooks very rich, both live in Barranquilla.
5. I can have a happy family being God, respect and tolerance the base of that family, I can also have it if I show my love and being responsible with them.
By: María José Bolaño
1. I would like to get married in approximately 10 years, because first I want to have something stable to offer and fulfill several projects that I have in mind, one of them, traveling.
ResponderEliminar2. The youngest person in my family is my brother Ever. He is 14 years old, and is in the ninth grade. He is a bit funny and spends most of his time playing on the computer. Still sometimes it shows that you can count on him.
3. I have only one grandmother, the others tragically died of sirrosis, cancer and parkinson's. Possibly my grandmother dies of a heart attack, but the funny thing is that even knowing that, she is happy and fun. An excellent counselor and of course, always talking to me about God, perhaps that is why she does not grieve to die. What a beautiful woman.
4. Someone very funny in my family is my aunt Melzar. She is awesome in a lot of ways, you can never neglect yourself because if not she starts teasing you in an awesome way, whether it's teasing your past as a little nephew or exaggerating little things about you, and it's so much fun when we meet her. She is someone to always keep in mind, with a single sentence she can make you laugh a lot.
5. The truth is that I don't know how many grandchildren I want to have. I could say that around six or eight, since in the end I want to have at most three children and that they have two or three children each. He would be a good grandfather, or that's what I think Hahahahahahahaha.
By: David Osorio
Dear David
EliminarGood job
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1. The oldest person in my family is my grandmother. My mother´s mother is Anna she is 91 years old, She lives in Buenavista and she likes to stay on terrace and talk.
ResponderEliminar2. On Christmas the whole family gathers to drink a large pot of chocolate with ducals or cheese. we talk to each other about what is happening or maybe we play some games.
3. My favorite uncle is Baldo, he always supported me and i like to spend time talking with him i like him to lend me his motorcycle
4. My family is five my father Morinson, my mother Arelis, the oldest is me, my sister Rosana and my little brother Pedro Jose
5. The twins are two children born at the same birth, my cousins Faber and Cristian are twins, ironically the eldest has two pairs of twins
By: David Arrieta
hi David
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